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About me
A friendly Vietnamese teenager has a normal appearance who is studying in a Vietnamese high school with a dream study abroad in Japan.
Maybe you think a student like me has just studied day by day, but actually I have joined in many activities while I am studying with expectation of getting more experiences in my life, especially experiences in Public Relations Environment. Have I already mentioned Public Relations?! Yes, it is it! You weren’t wrong.
Hobbies
Like many people of the same generation, I have a lot of simple hobbies, such as listening to music, surfing the internet, watching films or chatting.
Besides that, I like searching and enjoying creative media products with wishing that I can make media products by myself in one day. Yes, I do love work related to digital media like taking photographs, editing video, designing on the computer, basically, I like to create media products or media plans by my ideas. The crazy and creative things make me interested.
Activities
While I am in high school, I have been doing a lot of activities. Some typical organizations or club which I have entered:
1. InSOL - Psychology Club of Le Hong Phong high school for the gifted which I have prounded most.
2. 6/7 TK Class - a startup by a high school student.
3. Omis Organization - a nonprofit organization about art.
And some other activities. All of them, I have joined as a Public Relations Assistant.
I am so happy because I chose to be more active like that in high school time. Thanks for that, I could get more experiences and more friendships. And if you want to make friends but you are an introvert or a shy person who does not know how to get a friendship, I suggest you find and join some clubs or organizations or a group of people who have the same hobbies with you to make friends easily, and maybe you can find out what your dream, what you’re good in. So, why not try it?
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, if, may, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 5.60731707317 731% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 965.302439024 167% => OK
No of words: 342.0 196.424390244 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71637426901 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78531872863 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 106.607317073 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 283.868780488 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 76.8322888979 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6111111111 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0339660183907 0.215688989381 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00991853991168 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198686698345 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00918542346664 0.15604864568 6% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187226016697 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.