write the reason of the air pollution and how to decrease it
.For the being time, people have been facing to environment pollution. The two biggest problem are air and water pollution for the following reasons:The first, gas emmisions from factories and exhaust fumes vehicles lead to air pollution. There are industrializes that everyone need to build business unit in order to sastify their life. they cut down many trees to have enough wide developing engineers. Therefore; people are living surrounded CO2. It is the reason why someone have bad temperatures.The second , people suffer from pollutions as the human population increase. However; their awareness is too bad to protect the environment from keeping on polluting. they litter everywhere such as: in the ocean, in the lake, in the roadside..., which go on increasing pollutants pumped into the atmosphere.And so, it's necessary for everybody to save the nature from rising pollution. The first method, we have to raise children's alertness, even as a kid. Because the futire of the environment depends on the younger generations. Secondly, everyone must obey 3RS compaign: reduce, reuse, recycle, which help to dump less pollutants into the air. Finally, we should encourage to use public transport and take fewer flights abroad so as to decrease emmision garbage.In short, people have been devasting the environment lead to many serious pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
.For the being time, people have been fac...
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Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
.For the being time, people have been facing...
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Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ss unit in order to sastify their life. they cut down many trees to have enough wide...
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Line 1, column 406, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... have enough wide developing engineers. Therefore; people are living surrounded CO2. It i...
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Line 1, column 480, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...unded CO2. It is the reason why someone have bad temperatures.The second , people su...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...eason why someone have bad temperatures.The second , people suffer from pollutions ...
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Line 1, column 512, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...someone have bad temperatures.The second , people suffer from pollutions as the hu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...tions as the human population increase. However; their awareness is too bad to protect ...
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Line 1, column 669, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... environment from keeping on polluting. they litter everywhere such as: in the ocean...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...g pollutants pumped into the atmosphere.And so, its necessary for everybody to save...
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Line 1, column 958, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ise childrens alertness, even as a kid. Because the futire of the environment depends o...
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Line 1, column 1118, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun pollutants is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...uce, reuse, recycle, which help to dump less pollutants into the air. Finally, we sh...
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Line 1, column 1231, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...transport and take fewer flights abroad so as to decrease emmision garbage.In short, peo...
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Line 1, column 1266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...road so as to decrease emmision garbage.In short, people have been devasting the e...
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Line 1, column 1327, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pollution seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much serious pollution', 'a good deal of serious pollution'.
Suggestion: much serious pollution; a good deal of serious pollution
... been devasting the environment lead to many serious pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42180094787 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94229236679 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682464454976 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9251023798 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138294704836 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393893993781 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545147438707 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138294704836 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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