Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.
what do you do in the free time? some people often have a habit of shopping, listen to music and surt facebook. To me, the biggest joy is watching tv. I often watch tv with my family or friends. These tv shows give us laughter and meaningful lessons. my two favorite tv genre are sitcom and cartoons.
when we were young enjoyed watching cartoons, me too. The cartoon isn't only for children but also for adults. Now, when i was 19 years old, i used to watch cartoons. The cartoon with vivid colors, cute images and close to viewers. when we watch cartoons, we will feel relaxed. It gives us lots of laughter with enlightening images and actions of the charaters in the film. Besides, the cartoons also bring meaningful lessons, that is also how mothers can teach their children
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| 2019-03-16 | vothanhthao | 56 | view |
| 2015-10-05 | AiringDC | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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what do you do in the free time? some people...
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what do you do in the free time? some people often have a habit of shopping, ...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this tv' or ''?
Suggestion: This tv;
...ten watch tv with my family or friends. These tv shows give us laughter and meaningful l...
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Suggestion: My
...ive us laughter and meaningful lessons. my two favorite tv genre are sitcom and ca...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rite tv genre are sitcom and cartoons. when we were young enjoyed watching cart...
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...e tv genre are sitcom and cartoons. when we were young enjoyed watching cartoons...
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... watching cartoons, me too. The cartoon isnt only for children but also for adults. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r adults. Now, when i was 19 years old, i used to watch cartoons. The cartoon wit...
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Suggestion: When
...lors, cute images and close to viewers. when we watch cartoons, we will feel relaxed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 643.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59285714286 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35531314266 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.260434524 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.4615384615 112.824112599 44% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7692307692 22.9334400587 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0358224081303 0.215688989381 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.013752549668 0.103423049105 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384785673715 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.02578274695 0.15604864568 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133455054747 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 13.2329268293 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 10.3012195122 36% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.16 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.