Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the two graphs below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.
The pie charts above illustrates a sharp comparison of women’s highest education level in Someland in 1945 and 1995.
Obviously, in 1945, the education level of women was generally low. 35% women had not received any education, providing one of the largest proportions. Another major part, also presenting 35%, was taken up by women in third grade. No women had received a post graduate degree then.
However, 50 years later, in 1995, there was an apparent change. Half of the female population had received a first degree and 20% had gone to pursue a postgraduate degree, while no women received less than 6 years’ education. This is in stark contrast with 1945 where no women had pursued a post graduate program and only 15% percent of women had finished their primary school.
In conclusion, we can see clearly and from the year of 1945 to 1995, there had been huge positive developments in women’s education in Someland.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on level in Someland in 1945 and 1995. Obviously, in 1945, the education level ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'while', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265625 0.268076937826 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.130208333333 0.116061578633 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078125 0.0759168565197 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046875 0.0366838410393 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0104166666667 0.0131127313244 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109375 0.155750635184 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0520833333333 0.0379272487307 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78627295329 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0104166666667 0.0210936926555 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00520833333333 0.00175180941692 297% => OK
Determiners: 0.0885416666667 0.0948980150116 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00520833333333 0.00437022459523 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00520833333333 0.00967000014798 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 946.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.9 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02547770701 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31847133758 0.337110787985 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273885350318 0.247514529752 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203821656051 0.171178102325 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127388535032 0.112407865282 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78627295329 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.546246751206 119% => OK
Word variations: 61.7730785639 49.3433353143 125% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4444444444 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4231401901 42.9750493124 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 135.714022679 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.689975730869 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 44.8329794763 47.7609492067 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.27777777778 2.94281807926 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933846592558 0.418131533498 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116195345756 0.181151798455 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0947003329359 0.0850326197045 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.633393896845 0.706616315825 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.222809450055 0.157042692854 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495099705995 0.228904883108 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298181868152 0.108899403657 27% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.31842317753 0.367819155151 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0500400611864 0.0812612215331 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743197291511 0.316326947829 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125851636569 0.0921553760075 14% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 0.956097560976 418% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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