Writing Task 1 (Picture attached)
The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004
The chart illustrates how much oil was produced daily in 4 different countries, namely Nigeria, Chad, Congo and Somalia in the course of 4 years, starting in 2000.
Overall, there were upward trends in the daily production of oil in Nigeria, Chad and Somalia, with the exception of Congo witnessing a considerable decline between 2000 and 2004. Despite this, Congo consistently registered the highest figures among the countries examined before being surpassed by Nigeria in 2004.
Nigeria's oil output started at 205,000 barrels per day (bpd), after which it experienced a slight fluctuation in the range from 190.000bpd to 210.000bpd, before ending the period at 213.000 bpd. Meanwhile, 5.000 barrels of oil were produced in the year 2000 in Somalia, followed by a moderate rise to 50.000bpd in the end of the period.
Similar changes can be seen in the figure for Chad, whose oil production increased steadily from zero to reach the peak of 50.000bpd four years later. By contrast, the figures for Congo decreased significantly from 275.000bpd at the beginning of the period to hit a trough of 203.000bpd in the last year of the period examined.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...on of oil in Nigeria, Chad and Somalia, with the exception of Congo witnessing a considerable decline...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77609926611 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 19.6375317456 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170048289275 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861788109682 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462673611979 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107252052258 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430560504306 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.