You are planning a holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking to join and explain
• Why you are taking a holiday
• What is your holiday plan
• Why would you like him to come?
Dear James Smith
Hi there! I hope you are doing well and everyone in your family is doing well. I am also pretty good in spite of some ups and downs in my business. Anyway, the reason, I am writing a letter to you I am planning the vacations in the New York City of America in this summer. I would greatly appreciate if you can join me on this trip.
From last 1 year, I am very busy in my walk of life. Also, I did not take complete rest even at many Sundays from 3 months. Now, I am feeling tired and want a change from this environment. Therefore, I made the holiday plan in the New York City, where we will book a hotel near to a sea and enjoy the water sports such as surfing and play beach volleyball. Moreover, this city has many awesome restaurants for delicious food, superb shopping centers and beautiful night club for the dance.
Finally, I want that you team up with me in this mini break because I am more comfortable with you and when, you are with me, I always have more fun than usual. Furthermore, you are my best friend. Well, that’s all from my side.
Write back soon,
James Smith.
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