Dear Sir/ Madam
I am writing to express my concern over the expansion of the local airport, as it would have negative consequences to the neighbourhood in the vicinity.
Let me explain you the situation, we are living in a residential area that is too nearer to the said airport. The proposed improvement will make thing even worse.
Already, some people here have been diagnosed with a sleeping disorder, which is mainly due to the loud noises of the low-flying aeroplanes. Moreover, there is a school nearby where it has been recently observed that the plane movements in such a close distance are causing severe noise pollution and distractions to the pupils and teachers, eventually, students scoring poor grades in the exams.
As mentioned above the expansion will do no good to the residents, and for the betterment of the local people and school children, the government department shall withdraw the plan of enhancement of the airport.
I would like you to write a detailed report about the problems and disagreements over this recent development and lend your voice for our cause.
I hope my request will be considered positively.
Yours faithfully,
Akilan Palaniappan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20618556701 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92313038591 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675257731959 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2529834766 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213693338839 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741817872157 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682293520364 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855706618308 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674666999627 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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