Dear Jessica,
How’s going everything there in China? It’s been a long time we had a left each other from the University of Toronto, and I must say, I still miss those days with you roaming around the campus.
Last night I was looking for one of my favourite book in my bookshelf and you know, surprisingly I discovered another book while combing through the racks. What a shame, you gave me that book for preparing a class note on molecular biology and I forgot to return it! Anyway, I don’t know how much your on your way to get PhD and either you need that book again or not. But, I am really feeling guilty not to return your book before you left Canada.
By the way, I can send back that book via Fedex and that will not take even one month. I thought to send you a scanned copy of the whole book, then realized that the feeling of a hard cover is really different and this will bring back a lot of your memories at Toronto and campus life. May be be this week I will do the shipment and will send you the tracking number via email.
Anyway, I must get off now and I will call you soon to take your laboratory address in details just before submitting it to Fedex so that they can deliver it there directly. Till then, take care.
Bye for now.
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...emories at Toronto and campus life. May be be this week I will do the shipment and wi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, look, may, really, so, still, then, while, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 5.60731707317 749% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2962962963 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19662902843 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61316872428 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9858749142 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9090909091 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260269315758 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937379162208 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626279659217 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137417518088 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701266763114 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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