Some people think money is the best gift to give to youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both view and give you opinion.
A gift always renders a good feeling with emotions and from kids to old people, everyone loves getting a gift. While gifting to a youngster, some people consider money to be the most appropriate gift. However, there are also people from the other side who strongly deny the statement.
On the one hand, it is considered to be the wise approach to give money as a gift. This is because it can be reused to purchase things that are required rather than getting an unnecessary gift. Sometimes, based on the necessity, the money which is received as a gift can be considered as a savings and may be used in future for far better issues. Moreover, the person who provides money as a gift does not necessarily need to be worried about the choice of the recipient, as in most cases the young generations are of varied interests. Therefore, a significant amount of stress to purchase a present based on likings can be overlooked. Furthermore, in some common community events like someone’s birthday, there is a strong possibility to get similar even same gift more than once which is totally a coincidence but sometimes undeniable. In those case, money serves the best role as chances of having the same gift is totally absent.
Conversely, handing over money to a child as a gift rarely create any emotional bonding. This is because, in most cases, the young kids will not understand the value of money as to them money is nothing other than a few pieces of paper. Even they will not be able to remember that someone, for example, in his or birthday gave one thousand dollars as a token gift. Moreover, it not surprising to see that sometimes the parents of a child sometimes spend that money for other purposes knowingly or unknowingly. Therefore, the objective of giving a gift goes in vain and the kid becomes deprived somewhat.
All things together, money has certainly a value which is widely accepted. Therefore considering money as a present may hold that value intact both to the payer and payee. I personally believe, as the youngsters may have varied choices, it would be difficult to address those likings properly unless it is money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ainly a value which is widely accepted. Therefore considering money as a present may hold...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79301075269 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71828696023 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6719272321 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0555555556 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225440652421 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775578856089 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580043730517 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140806296551 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447713782203 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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