A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
- Describe your point of view
- Say what you like about the show and why.
- Ask the newspaper to take some action.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to express my deep concern with the article recently published in your magazine about the culinary program, The Master Chef.
The Master Chef is a famous TV program for the last five years and it is one of the demanding reality show among the people who are keen to culinary things. This program always disseminated motivation to the young chefs who want to build their career in the same track. Besides, it provides huge tricks and tactics for everyone who wants to be creative in the kitchen. I think, your journalist, Mr. Sam Conner could consider the program as a learning session for all the participants rather than taking it personally.
I am one of the fans of that program and I like the culinary skills of the host and his fairness towards the contestants. Although he sometimes expresses little impatience to the participant chefs, it is quite natural in a reality show and his constructive feedback outweighs everything. For this reason, the show is being viewed worldwide and the host is being considered as a celebrity among the young chefs.
I would like to suggest reconsidering while writing in a newspaper about a celebrity chef. At the same time, the journalist might be given a warning for professional development.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John Smithson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (TV) must be used with a third-person verb: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
...Chef. The Master Chef is a famous TV program for the last five years and it is one o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97368421053 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78225093821 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600877192982 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6999866773 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177984771326 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622032803778 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591252978335 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965001027294 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310347372872 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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