Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to clarify some points about "The Studious" TV show that was criticized by your newspaper on the previous week.
Personally, I find this series really beneficial for all people of various ages due to the substantial amounts of scientific information that are provided within every episode. Not only it helps people to know more facts about science and history, but it also clarifies the logical reasons for many mysterious phenomena.
Since the presenter endeavor to deliver the piece of information in an easy way accompanied by a sense of humor, most people find it intriguing to know more even if the presented topic is vastly sophisticated. As a result of this, most of the audience including myself, immensely like the way that the information is illustrated.
Finally, it would be appreciated if the newspaper changed the article's content for the sake of truth and authenticity. Because, the more fake news it presents, the less popular it will be.
Thanks a lot for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mark Ryan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...vor to deliver the piece of information in an easy way accompanied by a sense of humor, most p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, really, so, then, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17582417582 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98897058796 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697802197802 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9473440996 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158891985061 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559794277786 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656627827567 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817536865229 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982285304189 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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