You are staying at your friend's house who is travelling to another country. A recent storm damaged the house. Write to your friend and say
what happened and when
what was the damage in the house
what needs to be done about it
Dear Max,
How are you doing? Hope your trip to India coming along well. I'm just writting to update you on my stay at your place in Los Angles.
As you must have heard on the news, there was a thunderstorm that passed the city last week. Due to the heavy rain, part of the ceiling has developed a massive leakage and also thick cracks.
During the downpour, it's getting worse and the leakage is growing in size, which is weakening the foundation of the roof. Also, through these breakouts, the rain water is sweeping into the house and damaging the furniture in that area.
I appointed an inspection officer have a look and found out that the entire roof of the bedroom is very week now and needs to be changed completely. These repairs are required for safety concerns and need to be taken up as soon as possible. I have called the contractor tomorrow to understand the amount of work required and estimated cost.
Hope this doesn't affect your vacation mood too much. Don't worry, I will supervise this completely and make sure it is ready when you great back from your trip.
See you soon!
Love,
Andy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2648620267 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2080880971 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2307692308 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164621092373 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479313546713 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378461755092 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758922786892 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353995907714 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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