Dear Sir,
I am a regular member of your club for last three years and I am writing to inform you about my discontinuation from the next month.
As I can remember, three years ago, one of my friend introduced me with your club when I came at Danforth for my job. Soon after being influenced by the positive vibes of the club, I became a member by subscribing the Platinum Membership. For this category, I had to pay twice in a year and I had always done it though my credit card. To be honest, the club was really melting pot for the like-minded people from Danforth area. I must appreciate that I have developed a greater sense of socialization from this place and it helped me to recover from culture-shock here in Canada. I have learned how networking can be initiated simply by being a member of a renowned club like yours. Unfortunately, I will not be able to continue my official connection with this club from the next month.
I understand, the decision is abrupt and it was made once I got the notification from my employer to be transferred with promotion to the new branch at Scarborough. Therefore, I will not be able to maintain the membership from that remote place and hence, I am requesting you to consider my letter as a notification for discontinuation.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Kumar Sampad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64166666667 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99414938765 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554166666667 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4709353732 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254112856392 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089757445521 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572290447531 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144566940436 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624335017759 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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