You have a facebook friend living in country and he/she is curious to learn abt a major news items in your country.Write a letter to your facebook friend. In your letter1.Describe a news story in your country2.Explain why people are interested in it3.Say

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... your family be in health and happiness.As you know everyday people face to so man...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different news', 'a good deal of different news'.
Suggestion: much different news; a good deal of different news
....As you know everyday people face to so many different news in their own country . Most of them are...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
....As you know everyday people face to so many different news in their own country . Most of the...
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Suggestion: .
...many different news in their own country . Most of them are ordinary events but so...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Last
...y events but some of them are exception.Last week one of the most popular writers i...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... are exception.Last week one of the most popular writers in my country passed awa...
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...news in my country. Mr Ahmad Mahmmod wrote more than 30 romance story books ...
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... Mr Ahmad Mahmmod wrote more than 30 romance story books in his life .his sto...
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...than 30 romance story books in his life .his stories are about the war between o...
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...books in his life .his stories are about the war between our country and IRAQ. He...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have drawn' or 'draw'?
Suggestion: have drawn; draw
... between our country and IRAQ. He could drawn the life of our greatest national champ...
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Suggestion: .
...ational champion and his role in the war . People are so keen to read his books b...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... in the war . People are so keen to read his books because of his magic pen and h...
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Suggestion: .
...d in every subject that describe the war . I hope my news could be interesting fo...
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Suggestion: .
...lease be in touch via facebook and Email . Greeting You Nahid
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...acebook and Email . Greeting You Nahid
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50292397661 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41863513544 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5213292741 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161758263925 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613597379381 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500701699027 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891832224867 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529710295923 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.