You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. Yo have decide that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain what you would like to do
Explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years
Ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.
Hello Suresh,
How are you? How is your job going? I hope you are doing well in your career. I am writing this letter to seek your help to get information about computer science courses available at Newark institute of technology.
As you already know, I am working as a senior software engineer since last 5 years and I also talked with you on my future study plan. I searched on the Internet for masters courses available at some of the reputed colleges in your city and found that Newark institute of technology has variety of courses available to choose. So as you are living there, I actually want your favor. I want you to contact Computer science department of the college in person and inquire about master course requirement for embedded system stream.
I know that you are busy with your job but it would be great for me if you can help me out in this. Also give my regards to uncle and aunt and hope we will meet soon.
Best wishes,
Pratik Shah
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I am working as a senior software engineer since last 5 years
I have been working as a senior software engineer for 5 years
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