Hi Amit,
I want to say thank you for the hospitality you do on vacations. It was a fun and, a memorable trip. Now, I feel that it was a right decision to spend our holidays together at your place. I found interior as well as location of your house very exciting. Really, it was a pleasant stay.
However, as you know that none of our trip finish without having any problem. A problem free trip is not our cup of tea. I am writing to say that I forget my wallet at your home because of the hurry to catch the train. It will be in your TV room, where I took credit card from it to book my tickets. Please check the table at the corner. It is very precious to me as it is a gift from my uncle.
It'd be great if you can find it and parcel to me at my hostel address. But, make sure to cross check address properly before writing it down, as some important documents are in it. Also, do not forget to pack it properly, as it is a raining session.
Please get back me as soon as possible.
See you soon!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, i feel, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0198019802 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20118405723 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608910891089 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.663005353 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.75 112.824112599 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.625 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226155567653 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064318026131 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763828650722 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10560283955 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728496024067 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 13.2329268293 29% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 61.2550243902 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 10.3012195122 32% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.15 11.4140731707 45% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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