Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Rakesh Sharma and I am writing this letter to apply for a job in the City Museum in Hyderabad. Lately, I have gone through a newspaper that contains this job information. I wholeheartedly believe that I could perfectly fit in this employment as I have a perfectly matched role in my current organization. I have been working as an Administrator for the past five years in one of the reputed companies. In addition to that, I have got imperative skills such as managing not only assets but also people, preparing balance sheets and administering daily routines in the office.
I felt that this job role is fascinating because I completed my graduation in History. Being a historic student, I am curious to work on any renowned historic sites. This would be a great opportunity for me to get employment over there. I have attached my Curriculum Vitae with this email and please find it.
Please reply to me if you require any further details. I am looking forward to your acknowledgment.
Yours faithfully,
Mr. Rakesh Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86813186813 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02076581813 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9168498164 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8333333333 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217363552925 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698121525994 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689365458835 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123747538989 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792818368669 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.