You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping center has cheap second-hand furniture. Write to the shop owner. In your letter•Describe what you need•Ask whether they have these items•Wha

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to purchase inexpensive used furniture for my home.

I have recently rented a flat near Gachibowli in Hyderabad. When I went into the apartment then I realized that it was an unfurnished. Fortunately, one of my best friends has suggested that your shop i.e., Opportunity Shop is an excellent outlet for not only pre-owned but also reasonably priced products. Immediately, I browsed details about your shop on google then retrieved the address.

I would like buy some basic necessary items for the both bedroom and living room. The things that I need are four chairs and a table for the living room, a cot for my bedroom. I would like to mention that I don’t have preference over brand or material. It is absolutely fine for me, either plastic or wooden made, provided quality.

Moreover, I have couple of doubts regarding these. I wonder if you would answer them. Firstly, I would like to know whether these products are available because quite often I tend to see these are out of stock. Secondly, I would like to verify the prices ranges. So I can distribute my budget to the other things accordingly.

Please feel free to reply me if you had any doubts. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,
Mr. K.S.Rakesh Sharma

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Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed a flat near Gachibowli in Hyderabad. When I went into the apartment then I realiz...
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...e apartment then I realized that it was an unfurnished. Fortunately, one of my best friends ha...
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Suggestion:
...p on google then retrieved the address. I would like buy some basic necessary it...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'coupled'.
Suggestion: coupled
... provided quality. Moreover, I have couple of doubts regarding these. I wonder if ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Rakesh
...ur reply. Yours faithfully, Mr. K.S.Rakesh Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86936936937 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71661957473 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684684684685 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.440956593 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5882352941 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0588235294 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219430940662 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576770998776 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497184243485 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824907359281 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710242327144 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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