You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say- Apologize for damaging the product- How was it damaged?- What will you do about it?

Dear John,

Hope this letter finds you in the best of spirits. I am doing very well on this side. I would like to apologize for the inconvenience that I have caused by delaying payment that I had received a couple of months back. As a matter of fact, I wanted to repay you last month itself. However, Unfortunately, I had to transfer money to one of our friends due to a dire incident.

As you know, our best pal Smith was suffering from a severe fever. In last month, his condition became worse and his family was needed huge amount of money. For the same, they requested some amount from my side and I couldn't deny it. Thus, I had given yours to them. Much to my surprise, I came to know that you have become part in this donation by giving some. I am very glad about that. By and large, I will provide you the required amount of money in the next month as I would get my bonus apart from my salary.

Warm regards,
Rakesh

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...equested some amount from my side and I couldnt deny it. Thus, I had given yours to the...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, well, apart from, you know, as a matter of fact, by and large

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23463687151 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25748100048 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4826514995 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3076923077 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218076340942 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648958558874 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033432950219 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162555986439 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163819321154 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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