Some people like to travel outside their country. Others would rathertravel to tourist spots in their own country first, before travellingabroad. Which do you prefer to do and why? Include specific detailsand examples to support your choice.

It is undeniably true that travelling rate has been growing exponentially over few decades. While a minority of people prefers to travel their own nation primarily, while a majority keen on travelling abroad. I would rather prefer the primary point to later one. In this essay, I would provide my viewpoints with relevant facts and examples.

First of all, it would be really flexible for one to travel in their home land. There could be a multiple reasons behind this. Primary reason would be their expenses. Nowadays, the domestic airlines are offering reasonably prices with great deal of discounts across the country. Moreover, some of the travel agents are offering bunch of packages that wouldn’t cost an arm and a leg. These factors gather more attention from the holiday makers and they encourage them to travel more. In a recent study, it is proved that these offers raised travelling rate to 25% compared to previous year.

On the other hand, International trips are burdensome to some of the backpackers as it would cost astronomical prices for their holidaying. In addition to that, it is hard to find price reductions for long haul flights. Although some countries are offering visa free travelling such as Bhutan and Nepal, it is difficult to pursue for some because of cultural and budget problems.

In summary, in my opinion, the significant number of people would prefer domestic travel to international travel because of budget constraints and cultural problems. Moreover, they don’t feel it out of their comfort zone.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, so, while, in addition, in summary, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1581027668 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73848870877 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4640233655 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211386728095 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667504466788 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518362869664 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130146156622 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141718363485 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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