Some people like to travel outside their country. Others would rather
travel to tourist spots in their own country first, before travelling
abroad. Which do you prefer to do and why? Include specific details
and examples to support your choice.
With the increase in the means of transportation, people like to explore more places in their vacations or leisure times. Some people like international trips whereas other like to visit the attractions within their own country before going to a place in another nation. Even, I would agree with the later preference of initial travelling within own country before going abroad. In this essay, I would discuss my viewpoints with relevant facts and examples that will justify my selection.
There could be many reasons to go to different locations in my own land before travelling to other realm. First and foremost, the main cause of this is to gain a prior experience of travelling within the own comfort zone. In continuation to this notion, it is easy to communicate with people of a similar culture and it is comparatively easier to make arrangements of a trip within own country. Subsequently, it would be easier to get a help in case of an emergency by interacting in a regional language. For example, on a trip to Berlin, if a tourist is stuck at some-place surrounded by local people who can speak the only German language. In these cases, a native speaker can get help very easily. The tips during local would help a lot while travelling outside a country.
Moreover, travelling within own country costs less because the domestic mode of transportation is cheaper than international flights and currency values of some countries are lesser than other countries like 1 Canadian dollar costs 50 Indian Rupees. According to a recent survey, only 25% of the Indian population has a passport because most of the people like to travel in their own country first.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, travelling within own country first would prove very beneficial for international trips. Local tours can give an experience of time and expense management which could be used in preparing long distance trips.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01567398119 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88588939883 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539184952978 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6239369369 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293134029401 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986139465755 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642669284329 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17458349483 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055879012193 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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