You are applying for a job and you need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former boss.In your letter• Describe the job you are applying for• Say what you want to be included in the reference letter• Request that your former boss se

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You are applying for a job and you need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former boss.
In your letter
• Describe the job you are applying for
• Say what you want to be included in the reference letter
• Request that your former boss send you the letter by the end of the week

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing this letter to ask you if you could write me a reference letter. The job I am applying for is for a Development Consultant in a product based IT company. More specifically, the job is to give client demos.

Let me explain in more detail about the content of the reference letter. I know that I had worked as a software engineer in your organization but it would be very much appreciated if you could also include my various traits of personality. You can mention my hardworking and disciplined nature. As the job profile requires interaction with clients, it would be grateful if you could also mention my communication skills. I was a part of event organizing team and had participated in the arrangements of various outdoors and corporate get-together. The inclusion of such points can make my profile stronger.

It would be really kind if you could send me the reference letter by end of this week. The deadline to apply for this job with reference letters is this Monday and I don't want to miss this opportunity. I know you have a very tight schedule, but I would be highly thankful if you could mail me the letter as soon as you can.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,
ABC XYZ

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... reference letters is this Monday and I dont want to miss this opportunity. I know y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6592920354 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89022064248 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548672566372 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7704545326 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2142857143 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423055662793 0.216113520407 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137138851086 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946745273833 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266947899465 0.12726935374 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112006696327 0.0580467560999 193% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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