Some people think that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In a modern independent world, every individual has the right to take their independent decisions. In aide to this notion, some people opine that children should also be given a freedom to make their own choices whereas others believe that kids are still immature to take a stand without guidance and the right to make choice will make them grow into selfish individuals. I am a strong advocate of the former opinion that a pupil should be able to take a decision for himself in the matters concerning him. In this essay, I will discuss both the viewpoints.
Right to make independent decisions benefit a kid in many ways. First and foremost, the advantage of this is learning. A person learns the most from his own mistakes instead from someone else teachings. Moreover, this would make an offspring strong and independent. For instance, if a child makes a wrong decision then the outcomes would also be borne by him which would eventually develop many personality traits like calmness, patience. On the different side, if a kid gets success, then his self-confidence would also increase. Furthermore, technologies are advancing at a much greater pace. In some scenarios, a generation gap leads to a knowledge gap as well. As kids are mostly aware of the latest trends; therefore, it is advisable to let them decide.
However, some people feel that there is an important downside to this. Students will become self-centered and will not be concerned about their family and the people around them. However, in such cases, parents and elderly people can guide the offspring to go on a right path and take a decision empathetically.
To recapitulate, the positive outcomes of the right to take self-decisions far outweigh its negative consequences. In my opinion, the freedom to make independent choices would help a kid to judge right or wrong. This would further improve his analytical skills and would make him a strong-willed adult; ultimately all this would benefit the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
...pine that children should also be given a freedom to make their own choices whereas other...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...not be concerned about their family and the people around them. However, in such cases, parents and el...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03939393939 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90610484372 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0265804396 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5263157895 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169748624319 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046770839718 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594384989704 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113252015105 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716905656507 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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