You celebrated your birthday with friends and family in a restaurant last week. It was a great success.
Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. In your letter:
Mention the food and the service
Explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere
Suggest any improvements to make things better
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to thank you for the excellent services provided by your staff on my birthday party held in your restaurant last week. I had celebrated this occasion with my family, friends and relatives in your banquet hall. I must say every single person in the party were appreciating the services and food quality.
I asked for Chinese and Indian cuisine, plus a pineapple flavoured cake. Everybody loved the taste of Hakka noodles and cake. All guests were praising the ambience, especially kids. The hall was beautifully decorated with a birthday theme and children enjoyed a lot, playing with balloons.
I am highly impressed by the overall services, but I would like to give a suggestion as well. It would be great if you could install a good music system in the hall, that’s the only thing which was missing in the party, apart from this, all other services were amazing.
I would like to thank you once again for brilliant arrangements.
Yours Sincerely,
Harman Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nds and relatives in your banquet hall. I must say every single person in the par...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ating the services and food quality. I asked for Chinese and Indian cuisine, p...
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Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ements. Yours Sincerely, Harman Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00584795322 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62679226785 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6647634855 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269574792184 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786842018662 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900738343687 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131171107226 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982740359525 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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