It is irrefutably true that travelling has become every body cup of tea due to invention of technology, so that, it is debatable issue whether travel within country is more important prior travel to outside country or not. My views are in the synchronization with the latter view and reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Travelling inside country has bring numerous benefits. First and foremost, if public travel within country, they will not face language barrier and travel their comfort zone as compared to foreign country. To cite an example, if any person visit Germany where citizen speak only German language ,therefore person cannot discuss their problem owing to language barrier.In order to gain travel experience, people visit in tourist attraction places within nation, where they have not encounter different language. Moreover, internal travelling expenses do not increase huge burden on pocket because it not only need flights which cost exorbitantly high but also offer less expensive accommodation. For instance, a person travel to Canada,he will have to bear cost of flight and reserve accommodation which need amount in dollars and some developed country money value has exorbitantly high as compared to developing nations such as 1 Canadian is equal to 50 rupees in India, as a result a person need huge chunk of money in order to complete travelling.
In addition, travelling within country helps people to understand various customs, traditions, different language which offered by diverse country like India, For instance, India is a mosaic of hundreds of cultures ranging from Tamil and Malayalam in the south to Punjabi and Kashmir in the North. Similarly, there are more than a hundred languages spoken within India with about one thousand dialects. Before venturing to foreign lands and understanding their culture, it is vital for Indians to understand these cultures. On the other hand, knowledge can be escalated by visiting different nation as well as get a chance to learn new language and culture, would not be experience within nation.
To encapsulate, given aforementioned information,it is abundantly clear that although,travelling outside nation offers some benefits, travelling within country brings a lot of new experiences. I retreat my opinion, within travel should be more encouraged rather than foreign travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32702702703 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80967882611 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562162162162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 370.0 20.2975951904 1823% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1971.0 106.682146367 1848% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 370.0 20.7667163134 1782% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 142.0 7.06120827912 2011% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311451212574 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.311451212574 0.084324248473 369% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190587511997 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498609369144 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 188.7 13.0946893788 1441% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -312.53 50.2224549098 -622% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 148.8 11.3001002004 1317% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.87 8.58950901804 301% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 150.0 10.1190380762 1482% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 189.0 10.7795591182 1753% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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