It is undeniably true that, in the name of development, the majority of companies are contributing hazardous wastage to Mother Nature. While a significant number of environmental experts believe that imposing the taxes on the industries can diminish the negativity footprints on the environment, some argue that there are alternate methods to encourage companies to lessen pollution. In my opinion, there are numerous ways to motivate organizations to reduce their negative impact on nature instead of applying more taxes.
Admittedly, levying additional taxes on corporations might be an effective way to reduce the perilous emissions such as Lead and Carbon dioxide. For instance, in Uganda, the government has imposed more taxes to the industries which are emitting pollution. That reduced pollution minutely. However, this procedure would limit the national economy as these laws are stipulated by the authorities.
On the other hand, if governments grant more incentives to companies that reduce pollution, then these companies will strive to take serious steps to decrease their negative impact and gain rewards. Authorities can motivate companies in many ways. Firstly, certain tax reduction scheme can be granted to firms that decrease their pollution. For example, the corporate income tax in Turkey is around 35%; however, if a company uses a certain technology to reduce its carbon footprints, then this company will be eligible for tax reduction. Second, the government should consider granting loans at a discounted rate to companies that reduce toxins produced by their operations. This approach has proven its success in many counties like Japan and Taiwan.
In conclusion, I believe penalties might force companies to meet the minimum pollution standard; however, granting incentives and rewards schemes will encourage companies to be more innovative and reduce their industrial pollution to limits less than the set standards.
- Robots/Artificial Intelligence/ Automation could take away more and more jobs in future. How far do you agree to this statement? 73
- Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion. 11
- You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter, explain•Why you have changed the job•Describe your new job•Tell him/her your other news 75
- Many students like to get involved in extra- curricular activities at university such as social clubs and sports. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 78
- You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say- Apologize for damaging the product- How was it damaged?- What will you do about it? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'firm'.
Suggestion: firm
... tax reduction scheme can be granted to firms that decrease their pollution. For exam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62711864407 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92729872941 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3822858694 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210551337388 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741643997941 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037869409818 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127711410201 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284491590714 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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