You just moved to a new house. Write a letter to inform your friend and invite them to come to visit.1.When you moved to a new house2.Describe your new house3.Invite him to come

Hi John,

hope this letter finds you well. Its been some time that we last met and I would like to take this opportunity to invite you over to our new house that we have moved to recently. As you may be aware that our earlier house at Benton street was quite far from my school and even from my father's office. we were looking for a new place for about 6 months before we decided on this house in Kensington avenue. It is located only two blocks away from the Minerva community park and could be easily reached on feet from Trentbridge bus stop.

The new house has 3 bedrooms with a drawing room and an open space in the back. To the front is the lawn where various flowers are planted along with Guava and Orange trees. there is a little place for the bonfire as well. One of the other reason to move was we wanted to have a slightly bigger place as my sister would be back from her boarding school in the next summer. there is also a tree in the backyard which is a quite peaceful to rest under.

Its been almost a month since we moved here and we are planning a small get together of close friends at our place. I would really like if you could join us for same on Sunday, 18th September 2019. you can catch a bus from central terminus to reach Trentbridge in about 30 mins. we hope that you will join us and I look forward to have a great time.

Yours,
Sean

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi John, hope this letter finds you well. Its bee...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: We
...school and even from my fathers office. we were looking for a new place for about ...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...nted along with Guava and Orange trees. there is a little place for the bonfire as we...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...her boarding school in the next summer. there is also a tree in the backyard which is...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...or same on Sunday, 18th September 2019. you can catch a bus from central terminus t...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... to reach Trentbridge in about 30 mins. we hope that you will join us and I look f...
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Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to having'.
Suggestion: to having
...hat you will join us and I look forward to have a great time. Yours, Sean
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Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...forward to have a great time. Yours, Sean
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15355805243 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00656107944 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 106.607317073 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8844441767 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2142857143 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139864281077 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442912917035 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044957514762 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945508000917 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337014195423 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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