You play sports (eg football) for a local team.you recently heard that a player of your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your team-mate. In your letter you say how you feel about the news. Ask about the treatment in the hospital. Suggest some ways

Dear Frank,
I was very sorry to hear about your accident. I felt bad for not being with you in tough timings. I hope you doing better today and that it is not too boring in the hospital.
The last week game was fascinating and it was a close match. We lost the game in the final over by just two runs and it went down to the wire in the final over’s. This probably, you were not there in the team. You used to score quick runs at the top of the order. It was disappointing for me, I could not score the runs in the middle order and I was shocked that our team could not cross the line. Nevertheless, it was a good match in the end and we had a nail baiting thriller.
It is worth mentioning about the weather. It was very hot and humid. Pitch was dried up and seamers were getting the extra bounce. By end of the game whole team was down and everyone was exhausted.
Let us know when you are going home and we will arrange someone to pick you up for the next game to watch. We love to have you in the field as soon as possible.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Best wishes
Sudheerkumar

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...d as soon as possible. Looking forward to hear from you. Best wishes Sudheerkumar
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, nevertheless, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06880733945 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15988809263 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564220183486 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6279075978 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.1764705882 112.824112599 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8235294118 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.29411764706 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225743772905 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760455317076 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689736439705 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13944741699 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663958760415 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 13.2329268293 31% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 61.2550243902 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 10.3012195122 32% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.44 11.4140731707 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.9 8.06136585366 73% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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