It is undeniably true that different parts of the world witnessed a variety of climates such as hot and snow countries. While many citizens believe that living in a warm environment could be highly benefited, others argue that the later one would be more useful to the dwellers. In my opinion, living in a hot condition has more advantages over the cold climate.
To embark upon, although residents of tropical places exposed more to the sun, this would provide enough vitamins which are highly essential to the human body from the sunlight, especially vitamin-D. Apart from this, the humid conditions in such places assist agriculture and might create a sophisticated platform to cultivate more both seasonal fruits and vegetables. For instance, nations like India and Sri Lanka produce more coconut than any other western regions. On top of this, such places not only aid in easy transportation but also in building new infrastructure.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, the cold conditions have a plethora of advantages as well. Firstly, compared to the hot territories, the cold countries have more breathtaking places as well as picturesque villages and because of this, holidaymakers choose to travel these kinds of far-flung places. Secondly, due to the weather conditions in winter seasons, it would be highly impossible for the natives to hit the roads after some time. Thus, it would allow more time to spend with either family or friends.
To conclude, even though the chilled conditions have advantages, for example, more family time and scenic places, however, the warm conditions would be perfect for transportation, agriculture and for more life span.
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- We have been living in the nuclear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology had provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24074074074 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8499296071 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625925925926 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8541621318 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106742330327 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444789442771 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452960578395 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670892078579 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632507120153 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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