A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter⦁give contact details for when you are away⦁give instructions about how to care for your pet⦁describe other household duties

Dear Rakesh,

I hope this letter find you in good spirits. Firstly, I would like to say that I am honored for your gesture and for agreeing to look after my dog and my home while I am on vacation.

I am travelling to New Zealand with my family for a two-week break. As of now, I do not have any local contact number. However, I can WhatsApp you as soon as I have it. Meanwhile, please drop me in an email to motakatlasudheer@gmail.com.

My dog Scooby is entertaining and I hope you will have a good time with him. In this period of two weeks, please wash my dog on every other day. In terms of the food, Scooby like to have chicken every day. Could you please feed him with fresh meat? On top of this, please take him to the nearest part for an evening walk if you have spare time.

My house is a small a two-bedroom flat. I request you to clean it at least once in a week. Apart from this, can you please collect all the mails which are delivered to my address.

Yours truly,
Sudheerkumar Motakala

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, so, while, apart from, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24742268041 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74991183348 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3084087915 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.9333333333 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9333333333 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173897840378 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572404204416 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051107388172 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845488919002 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789443807617 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.48 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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