Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing this letter to extend my thanks to you for the wonderful trip that you arranged for us.
Of late, I have travelled to the state of Goa and some of the picturesque places in that particular state. I have booked a guided tour package in your website. To embark upon,I would like to appreciate your personal guide. He was never reluctant to help us. Moreover, he went to the extra mile in dire situations. With the help of the guide we had been to a pethora of natural beauties such as Bhaga beach, Dood sagar and so on. My family, instantely liked those beaches and refreshing waterfalls. Infact, we fell in love with the stunningly beautiful places.In addition to that,The Airbnb, that you prvided was outstanding as it accomodated morning complementory breakfast and dinner.
Having said that, there are quite a few things which disappointed us. Firsty, There was a power outage frequently. Although we didn't stay most of the time during our vacation in the room, we felt exasperated at times. Secondly, there was a discrepency in the prices that were mention in both online and offline. I would suggest you to rectify it.
If you have anything to discuss please don't hestitate to reply to this email.
Yours faithfully,
Rakesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... have travelled to the state of Goa and some of the picturesque places in that particular s...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... package in your website. To embark upon,I would like to appreciate your personal ...
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Line 5, column 560, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ve with the stunningly beautiful places.In addition to that,The Airbnb, that you p...
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Line 5, column 579, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...gly beautiful places.In addition to that,The Airbnb, that you prvided was outstandin...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... a power outage frequently. Although we didnt stay most of the time during our vacati...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... I would suggest you to rectify it. If you have anything to discuss please don...
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Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... If you have anything to discuss please dont hestitate to reply to this email. Y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84862385321 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68392954932 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678899082569 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3141957008 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0625 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249696077984 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695298601252 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610213018474 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135753396734 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413463740662 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.