Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for a music composer position in your band which was advertised in a local newspaper.
My name is Sudheerkumar, I am music enthusiastic and it has been my only passion since I was seven years old. I have been playing a variety of instruments ever since and I also have a master's degree in music from Berklee College of Music. Apart from it, I have not only performed several stage shows but also trained other students in my free time.
I have outstanding knowledge of playing Guitar and I always keen on developing new tunes from it. Furthermore, I have a sophisticated lab at my home where I practice my music regularly, as a result of my efforts I have composed a few fresh tracks, which I could demonstrate. Although I don’t have any hands-on experience on the keyboard, I know a few basics.
Somehow, I believe both my experience and skill makes me a perfect candidate for the role you have been looking for.
I look forward to discussing this opportunity further at interview.
Yours faithfully,
Sudheerkumar Reddy Motakatla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, so, thus, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80628272251 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94351677434 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9692722258 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967699563359 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435211779517 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641645348686 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543866988118 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761236713901 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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