Dear Sir,
This is to state that I rented a car from your company two months ago. I am a civil engineer who is working in your city on a temporary basis and my job requires travelling long distances in the day-time. Therefore, a car with a working air-conditioner is a pre-requisite for me.
I am writing this letter to bring to your urgent notice that my car's air-conditioner suddenly broke down a week ago for which I had telephoned your company to arrange for its repair but up till now I have not received any such help. Hence, I urge you to send a personnel from your company to my address as soon as possible so that the air-conditioner of my car is repaired without further ado.
Hoping for a prompt action on your part.
Sincerely,
Roman.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 623.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51449275362 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90257872297 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8408398009 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249393556863 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103025566037 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07770882739 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146576786293 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822872792214 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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