You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The pie chart shows the percentage of people who visited four different categories of tourist attractions in Britain in 1999. Overall, theme parks were the most visited tourist attraction and among them Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the most popular one. While 38% of the people visited theme parks, museums and galleries attracted 37% of visitors.
By contrast, historic houses and monuments had only been visited by 16% of the people who participated in the survey. By contrast, wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attractions and they were visited by just 9% of the people.
Among the five theme parks mentioned in the survey, Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the most visited as about half of the (47%) who visited theme parks had been to it. Alton towers and Pleasureland in Southport welcomed about the same percentage of the people (17% and 16% respectively). Finally, 20% of the people who visited theme parks went to Chessington World of Adventure or Legoland in Windsor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...f tourist attraction in britain in 1999.The different tourist attraction includes w...
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Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Alton
...owing cateogries such as Blackpool beach,Alton towers,Pleasureland which contributes 4...
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Line 2, column 398, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Pleasureland
...ies such as Blackpool beach,Alton towers,Pleasureland which contributes 47%, 17% and 16% resp...
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Line 2, column 461, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tributes 47%, 17% and 16% respectively. The other subcategories in theme parks are ...
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Line 2, column 599, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Followed
... both parks have similar ratings of 10%.Followed by theme park,the second highest catego...
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Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ar ratings of 10%.Followed by theme park,the second highest categories where people ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , most
...nts 37% of overall pie chart. Therefore,most of people are accomadated at theme park...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ts 37% of overall pie chart. Therefore,most of people are accomadated at theme park and museu...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are gathered at monuments and Museums.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60115606936 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92704800274 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531791907514 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1238814671 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.428571429 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150924489412 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804734801058 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786096889971 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127179119917 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931124091216 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.