You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1950 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The illustration provides data on marriages and divorces in the United Kingdom from 1950 to 2000.
It is clear that the number of total marriages was the lowest at the beginning of the examined period. On the other hand, the figure reached a peak in 1980. Besides, the number of divorces witnessed the uptrend between 1950 and 2000.
The proportion of 1st marriages accounted for about 350 thousand in 1950 and documented upsurges to just over 400 thousand in 1980, after which the figure had a decrease of 350 thousand in 2000. Additionally, there was a fluctuation in the number of 2nd marriages over the period shown (the figure went down by nearly 100 thousand in 1960, increased to roughly 110 thousand in 1980 and dropped by 100 thousand in 2000).
Within the period of 20 years starting from 1980, there was a climb for divorces from about 10 thousand to 300 thousand while the opposite was true for total marriages, between around 550 thousand and 450 thousand. Furthermore, the proportion of 2nd marriages was twice larger than divorces in 1950 with 100 thousand and just over 0 thousand. However, in 1985, 2nd marriages and divorces had a similar number at 100 thousand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... just over 0 thousand. However, in 1985, 2nd marriages and divorces had a similar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83251231527 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59718523729 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477832512315 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1401654984 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146983529177 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901926677881 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560904502575 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120438887753 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368183898726 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.