You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given figure describes step by step how a concrete canvas storage area is made. There are 8 steps to make this from the first step of manufacturing the concrete to the final step of storing
First of all, the concrete canvas is made manually with three layers, the fibrous on the top, the dry concrete in the middle and the waterproof layer is set in the bottom. Following that, the concrete canvas is collected and could be delivered to the user location by wrapped in a box. After that, when it is brought to the suitable ground, the 10 metres wide canvas is unwrapped and locked permanent by four pegs in its corner and stretch by the rope. Then, the air is blowed by the airpump underground and made the canvas inflated. In the concrete canvas, they design a door in the hip for convenient to use. Finally, before use, they watered the canvas and setting for 20-24 hours to make sure this could be stored in it.
Overall, this is a length process of making the concrete canvas, beginner with the manual concrete and conclude with the end product being used.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55440414508 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31039284794 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554404145078 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5812230838 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177126222594 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751685467699 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430812671626 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124513408015 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00935983568616 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.