You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given line garph illustrates how many worldwide tourisms who visit to three different areas in a European nation over the period of 20 years, started from 1987.
What stands out from the line graph is that while the coast was the highest over 20 years, the mountains was reduce to lowest. Furthemore, all the areas had the upward trend and the lakes had the most fluctuate.
In 1987, the coast was largest with 40 thousands before witnessing a slightly decrease in 1992, at roughly 35 thousands. In contrast, the coast experienced a stability soar to around 75 thousands in 2007. In term of the mountains, the figure ranked second in 1987 with 20 thousands after increasing to 30 thousands in 1997. While the number of the mountains from 1997 to 2002 unchanged, between 2002 and 2007 the average was continued improve to roughly 35 thousands.
Besides, in 1987, with just 10 thousands, the lakes was the lowest before witnessing an substantialy bounce to 40 thousands in 1997. Similarly, the number of the lakes rocketed in the period of 5 years, started from 1997 to around 75 thousands. The contrast at the end of period, the lakes was had the downward trend which seen an remarkably plummet in 2007, at 50 thousands to ranked second.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...ighest over 20 years, the mountains was reduce to lowest. Furthemore, all the areas ha...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...est with 40 thousands before witnessing a slightly decrease in 1992, at roughly 35 thousands. In co...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ty soar to around 75 thousands in 2007. In term of the mountains, the figure ranke...
^^
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... lakes was the lowest before witnessing an substantialy bounce to 40 thousands in ...
^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s was had the downward trend which seen an remarkably plummet in 2007, at 50 thous...
^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('remarkably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('plummet') instead of another adjective.
...s was had the downward trend which seen an remarkably plummet in 2007, at 50 thousands to ranked seco...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, similarly, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60538195728 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516279069767 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5878018538 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104077334628 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448241015305 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032841345642 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737905213361 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374378646957 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...ighest over 20 years, the mountains was reduce to lowest. Furthemore, all the areas ha...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...est with 40 thousands before witnessing a slightly decrease in 1992, at roughly 35 thousands. In co...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ty soar to around 75 thousands in 2007. In term of the mountains, the figure ranke...
^^
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... lakes was the lowest before witnessing an substantialy bounce to 40 thousands in ...
^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s was had the downward trend which seen an remarkably plummet in 2007, at 50 thous...
^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('remarkably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('plummet') instead of another adjective.
...s was had the downward trend which seen an remarkably plummet in 2007, at 50 thousands to ranked seco...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, similarly, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60538195728 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516279069767 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5878018538 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104077334628 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448241015305 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032841345642 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737905213361 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374378646957 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.