You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart compares different age groups of children in the United Kingdom over a period of 11 years (1990-2001).
Overall, as can be seen from the graph, while the number of children from 0-4 witnessed a drastically downward trend, the ratio of 10-14 year-olds underwent the opposite displacement. In the meantime, fluctuations overtook the total of two other groups.
At the beginning of the period, the percentage of the youngest age group exceeded that of adolescents; however, it declined gradually later and reached circa 22% in 2001. Teenagers (between 10 and 14) outraced juveniles percentagewise in 1992; their growth then overshadowed that of the two other groups.
On the other hand, the number of 15-19 year-olds showed a precipitous fall in the first three years, two subsequent years experienced a plateau, and it grew steadily to 25% at the end of the period. Meanwhile, the percentage children aged from 5 to 9 saw stable positive growth; those following years, though, there was a slight decrease in their population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... over a period of 11 years 1990-2001. Overall, as can be seen from the graph, ...
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...ertook the total of two other groups. At the beginning of the period, the perc...
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...hadowed that of the two other groups. On the other hand, the number of 15-19 y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18934911243 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93729622507 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2859614427 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.285714286 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152798435289 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071242457011 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076962654089 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106870240867 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812624598417 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.