You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.
The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
You should write at least 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates the proportion of commodities sold aborad to 4 regions from 1990 to 2012
Looking from overall perspective, it is readily apprent that most of commodities was exported to Japan, as opposed to India. It was also noticeable the position of Japan was taken place by China later.
Concerning the percentage of products sold abroad to Japan in 1990, its figure started at about 26% , aftere which saw asignificant decline to to around 19% after a decade and ended with figure being recorded at roughly 17%. in 2000 Turning to US, the figure was recorded at about 12%, followed by a fluctuation from 9% to about 13% between 1995 and 2005 and finally plunged to 7% in the final year.
In terms of the figure for Australian exports to the two remaining country, started the period lower with 2% for India and 3% for China. Over the next ten years, both figures witnessed an upward trend to 3% and 5% respectively. From 2005 onward, the proportion of products sold abroad to India surged steadily and ended with the figure being recorded at 6% and for China its figure started to soar sharply and finally reached a peak at 30%, which was 5 times higher than the figure of India.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld aborad to 4 regions from 1990 to 2012 Looking from overall perspective, it is ...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the commodities') or simply say ''most commodities''.
Suggestion: most of the commodities; most commodities
...perspective, it is readily apprent that most of commodities was exported to Japan, as opposed to In...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in 1990, its figure started at about 26% , aftere which saw asignificant decline t...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
..., aftere which saw asignificant decline to to around 19% after a decade and ended wit...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...h figure being recorded at roughly 17%. in 2000 Turning to US, the figure was re...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e being recorded at roughly 17%. in 2000 Turning to US, the figure was recorded ...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... at roughly 17%. in 2000 Turning to US, the figure was recorded at about 12%, fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69811320755 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50276577817 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3040617994 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.285714286 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115399295793 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530953677767 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369382041269 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703222285363 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222745013418 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.