You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given picture depicts the various parts and working principle of balloon.
Bottom of the parachute is comprised of skirt, rope, burner , basket and propane cylinder. basket at the end to support burner which contain propane gas mixed with air to burn and make it hot which enters into parachute by skirt which supports the upper part.
The envelope is consisted of panels, number of gores and parachute valve. The mixed gas which was flamed from the bottom becomes lighter as it is hot which by principally rise in the envelope and allows cold air to condense. Condensed air rises again and thus cycle is repeated is eventually controlled by parachute valve on the top which control rate and escape hot air volume inside the balloon.
To conclude, it can be seen from the given information that how such a huge balloon is capable to rise in the air which is nothing but a science of hot and cold air.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The given picture depicts the various parts and working principle of b...
^^
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...le of balloon. Bottom of the parachute is comprised of skirt, rope, burner , basket and propan...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hute is comprised of skirt, rope, burner , basket and propane cylinder. basket at ...
^^
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Basket
..., burner , basket and propane cylinder. basket at the end to support burner which cont...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66875 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35453705834 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0170033609 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752731625502 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400614050906 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378701958162 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624141463013 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340139153203 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.