In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities. What has caused this? What solution can you suggest ?
While contemporary world has been witnessing perilous effects of pandemic, number of crimes has been exponentially augmented in many regions as some communities woefully affected by this. This essay will intricate causative factors and possible solution with plausible conclusion at the end.
To commence, several factors are responsible to commit crime. Youth, now-a-days, indulge more in drugs and alcohol activities since an early age which sometimes encourage them to stole money either from home or somewhere else. In spite of working hard, families who are hardly fed once a day sometimes attracted to attend short way such as burglary for their basic amenities. Frequently, outside activities can force people to become a victim of this whole scenario such as betting.
However, implementing possible measures to tackle this situation can assist to curb this situation. Firstly, criminals shall be educated while suffering sentence which may aware them and can stop being vulnerable toward such activities. Secondly, For all those, who execute dangerous crime, stringent actions must be taken. Parents shall be punished if children involved in major offence.
To conclude, although youths are major attraction for such activity who can be easily captivated at this age, however, in my perspective, it can be cope up by providing some tough rules and regulation. Government needs to take this as their obligation to curb this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...le scenario such as betting. However, implementing possible measures to tackle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5201793722 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8120060435 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713004484305 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5365390526 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.583333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147937118662 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569370751647 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417641249156 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909223194179 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217395471496 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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