Many countries are still facing problems regarding a huge population. To control the ever increasing population many people believe that Government can control the population through taxes.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Growing population across the world, and a number of problems associated with it, however, is a controversial question for a nation in this contemporary era. People believe that an authority should impose tax to curb rising citizens. I sincerely believe that the later view will be more effective and will be analysed in the forthcoming paragraph.
To commence, an increasing residents can generate more stress on government to handle situation from all aspects. Firstly, more habitants means more congestion on the roads, thus not only traffic issues arise frequently but also it generate more pollution since the personal vehicals become a trend. Moreover, expansion of a family is a conventional thought, despite living below poverty line as it costs more for education, health and other basic amenities.
On the contrary, The reason why imposing some stringent rules over citizens to curb this situation would be an effective way to solve this problem. Predominantly, destitute family would be affected to higher extent by handsome tax, and would began to realise that their basic amenities more imperative than family multiplication. Higher taxes implied on houses and rents too as more accommodation would be on demand. For instance, strict rules and regulations have been followed in other countries which only allows free education of single child while need to pay double for the more than that if they have.
In conclusion, despite the fact how having and expanding family is equally imperative for one, it should stress government and economy. Therefore, one of the efficient way to bolster economy and government is by applying stringent rules over more than one child and imposing tax over primary things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'resident'?
Suggestion: resident
...aragraph. To commence, an increasing residents can generate more stress on government ...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'habitants'' or 'habitant's'?
Suggestion: habitants'; habitant's
...tuation from all aspects. Firstly, more habitants means more congestion on the roads, thu...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'generates'?
Suggestion: generates
...fic issues arise frequently but also it generate more pollution since the personal vehic...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'begin'
Suggestion: begin
...igher extent by handsome tax, and would began to realise that their basic amenities m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31386861314 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82137325623 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5991803187 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101271859589 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408152555892 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037398348967 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646326103628 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436044459068 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.