You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 word

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart above illustrates the main purposes that people came to and left the UK in 2007.Overall it can be seen that the primary reason influencing this decisions was employment.

To begin with, definite job was the major factor that people moved to UK accounted by 30%.This factor was fairly similar to the people moved out from the UK rated by 29%.Another main objective afecting relocation to the UK was for formal study, with over a quarter of people immigrating for this reason. However, only a small minority 4% left for this.

A large number of people 22% also emmigrated because they were looking for job,though the proportion of people entering the UK for this purpose was noticeably lower at less than a fifth.The percentage of people accompanying family member were quite similar for immigration and emmigration at 15% and 13% respectively.Although a significant number of people (32%) gave other reasons or did not give a reason why they emigrated, this accounted for only 17% with regards to immigration.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The pie chart above illustrates the main purposes tha...
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
... people came to and left the UK in 2007.Overall it can be seen that the primary reason ...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...hat people moved to UK accounted by 30%.This factor was fairly similar to the people...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...ople moved out from the UK rated by 29%.Another main objective afecting relocation to t...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reason. However, only a small minority 4% left for this. A large number of p...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
... a small minority 4% left for this. A large number of people 22% also emmigrated because the...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or this. A large number of people 22% also emmigrated because they were lookin...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , though
...grated because they were looking for job,though the proportion of people entering the U...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...s noticeably lower at less than a fifth.The percentage of people accompanying famil...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...emmigration at 15% and 13% respectively.Although a significant number of people 32% gave...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, as for, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04117647059 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03411399767 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.25667176 43.030603864 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.25 112.824112599 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 22.9334400587 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179852489122 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118982357834 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368661704469 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139105896378 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277816548066 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 61.2550243902 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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