The given bar chart illustrates the information about urban areas in the world .The vertical axis represents the proportion of population in varied years and the horizontal axis indicates about the various continents.
It is crystal clear that the percentage of world population was uppermost in the past years during 1950 and 2007 as compared with Africa and Asia but in the comparison of these two continents except world, both were familiar with each other in previous years and will be similar in 2030.So,according to the given information the population of world will be highest by 60% in 2030 rather than Africa and Asia.
Moreover, the North America, Latin America as well as Europe population was approximately constant in 2007 and according to the future predictions the North America will be highest in 2030 by 87% as compare with other continents.
Overall,it can be clearly notified that the North America continent was topmost in past years and it will be at peak point in the future.
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- Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.How far do you agree or disagree with the 91
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05421686747 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84223098345 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.4535067255 43.030603864 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.75 112.824112599 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.5 22.9334400587 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.23603664747 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154320793284 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101987611048 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109991887203 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101987611048 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109991887203 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.2329268293 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.