You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The diagrams classify the wave-energy machine design and where it located. Overview, it is clear that a wave-energy machine has two chambers; one is under the water and the other one is above the water. And, it also has two optional locations depend on wave size and output.
Firstly, the wave direction rises the level of water inside the chambers. Then, the water streams and flows through the second chamber which has the turbine-powered by an electricity generator. At the same time, the machine transforms the airflow into the water in a second chamber by using a turbine.
According to locations, it depicts two kinds of wave-energy machines; the large waves machine locates deep water with high production and costs, while the small waves machine locates in surface water with low production and costs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce water with low production and costs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14179104478 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65403184841 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8620619469 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119983647005 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683598985324 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696070896074 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862519883954 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416647819674 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.