You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should writ

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Submitted by lunchtime on Fri, 08/02/2019 - 09:25

The graph provided indicates the total number of university graduates from year 1992 to 2007 in Canada. It is categorised according to the gender.

Overall, the number of graduate students keeps on increasing over a span of 16 years. However the percentage of female students outnumbered the male students in every year.From year 1992 to 1995 there was a slight increase in the number of both the categories. In the following year the rate went down until the year 2001. From year 2002 to 2007 both the groups increased significantly.

In the year 1992, male graduates were slightly just above 70,000 although one lakh females were graduated in the same year. The male students grew up to 6,000 in 1995 as compared to 4,000 females. In the coming four years their rate fell moderately. From year 2000 to 2007 the number of female graduates increased considerably however in 2001 the percentage of male students went down moderately. In 2007 the rate of both the groups escalated substantially with 147,000
number of females and 96,000 males nevertheless the gap between the two classes widened the most in the same year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
...umbered the male students in every year.From year 1992 to 1995 there was a slight in...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ups escalated substantially with 147,000 number of females and 96,000 males never...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97354497354 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68427669882 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2502087522 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4545454545 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10929398493 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553881661055 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691879823108 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944285259578 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722776708504 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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