You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevantYou should writ

The table provides the information of sales from a week from 7 started by Monday in a restaurant settled at Downtown business district during the time of lunch and dinner

Oberoi, during the lunch time at Wednesday most of the cells have done while in the send a list of the people came to the restaurant during the lunch time . In contrast at the dinner time during Friday says have been done more whereas at Sunday hardly some of the people have came

At the beginning, during the lunch time at Wednesday the cells have made a with 2,545$ and at Sunday the sales have done with $1050 and in other days that is Monday, Tuesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday the average sales have accounted which was $2,400, $2,050 ,$2,375 ,$5,200 , $1,950

In contrast, during the time of dinner the total sales are much more than the lunch. The sales where getting a steady rise during those days with dollar 3800 respectively anchor says show and downward trend during Sundays with dollar 2050 where as on the days Monday ,Tuesday ,Wednesday, Friday ,saturday all the sales were average

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ay most of the cells have done while in the send a list of the people came to the restau...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... to the restaurant during the lunch time . In contrast at the dinner time during F...
^^
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...e restaurant during the lunch time . In contrast at the dinner time during Friday says h...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'Sunday'.
Suggestion: Hardly Sunday
...day says have been done more whereas at Sunday hardly some of the people have came At the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...been done more whereas at Sunday hardly some of the people have came At the beginning, d...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$545'.
Suggestion: $545
... Wednesday the cells have made a with 2,545$ and at Sunday the sales have done with ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e average sales have accounted which was ,400, ,050 ,,375 ,,200 , ,950 In cont...
^^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...age sales have accounted which was ,400, ,050 ,,375 ,,200 , ,950 In contrast, ...
^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...les have accounted which was ,400, ,050 ,,375 ,,200 , ,950 In contrast, during...
^^
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...ve accounted which was ,400, ,050 ,,375 ,,200 , ,950 In contrast, during the t...
^^
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...counted which was ,400, ,050 ,,375 ,,200 , ,950 In contrast, during the time o...
^^
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which was ,400, ,050 ,,375 ,,200 , ,950 In contrast, during the time of dinner t...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'anchor' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'anchors'.
Suggestion: anchors
...hose days with dollar 3800 respectively anchor says show and downward trend during Sun...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...d trend during Sundays with dollar 2050 where as on the days Monday ,Tuesday ,Wednesday,...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... dollar 2050 where as on the days Monday ,Tuesday ,Wednesday, Friday ,saturday all...
^^
Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...050 where as on the days Monday ,Tuesday ,Wednesday, Friday ,saturday all the sale...
^^
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... days Monday ,Tuesday ,Wednesday, Friday ,saturday all the sales were average
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19382204912 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524064171123 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 22.4926829268 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.323919824 43.030603864 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.333333333 112.824112599 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.3333333333 22.9334400587 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113034553421 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871051852522 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280304297348 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906938177006 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536691990483 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.9 13.2329268293 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.47 61.2550243902 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.3012195122 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.93 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.4329268293 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.9970731707 244% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.