You want to appear for an interview to an another city by train. The train departed late from the station and you could not reach in time.
Write a letter to the railway officer of your city. In your letter.
When you traveled and why the train departed late.
What happened as a result.
How you feel about the problem.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complaint about delayed departure of Mumbai Express from our city railway station on Last Sunday (19/1/2019) because of some personal dispute between train staff and station management officers. This matter results in a serious delay of 6 hours from the scheduled departure time.
As a result, I missed the second round of my interview. I not only lost a significant opportunity but also now I cannot apply in the same company for next one year, which will impact my career growth tremendously. I am really disappointed with our city station management and I want some strict action to be taken against the involved employees. I am also sending a copy of this letter to local newspaper.
I hope you will personally look into this issue and take some stringent disciplinary action in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Kamalpreet
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Comments
Dear Sir,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the late departure of the Awami express from our city station last Sunday 5/12/2019 due to some personal dispute between train staff and station management officer. This resulted in a serious delay of 4 hours from scheduled departure time.
Actually, I was traveling from Mumbai to Chennai regarding my dream job interview in a multinational company. I was supposed to reach there by 11 am but to this mishappen, I not only missed my second round of interview but also a significant job opportunity. Moreover, I am ineligible to apply to the same company for a job for one year. This accident has left a negative impression on my overall career growth.
I am very disappointed with the city station management service and I would like that central train authority should take a serious action regarding this matter so that in future no one can suffer from such a loss.
I hope you would personally look in this issue and will take some prompt action to assure the scheduled departure and arrival of trains.
Thanks
XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, second, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07586206897 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78687257326 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703448275862 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.6397188292 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166281748056 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623582710993 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413963284952 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919318125455 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044028415432 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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