Dear Sir/ Ma'am,
I am writing this letter to file a complaint regarding my recent purchase from your shop. I am Meena Roy, bought Dough Maker from your shop last week.
When I purchased this equipment, your shop's customer representative gave a demo for it and it worked fine at that time. But, once I got this at home it did not work at all. To file the complaint at your shop I contacted them and told the whole scenario but they denied to file my issue. For your easiness, I request them to repair it instead of giving me new equipment.
However, even after having a warranty for this purchase I am not able to return this item and get a new machine. As you already know that Phillips Dough maker is very expensive and as it is not working, so that I want you to give my money back or give me a brand new machine in return.
I request you to kindly look into this matter with high priority so that I can use the machine as soon as possible.
Thank you, Meena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Maam, I am writing this letter to file a compl...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied filing'.
Suggestion: denied filing
...em and told the whole scenario but they denied to file my issue. For your easiness, I request ...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... give me a brand new machine in return. I request you to kindly look into this m...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1935483871 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27700708037 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4072457427 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236376339388 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975545061406 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449035496972 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12579812406 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459775402292 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.