2 weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well known chain of shops It did not work properly The shop took it back and said they would repair it You have waited a week and still it is not ready Write a letter to the shop In your letter say w

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2 weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and still it is not ready.
Write a letter to the shop. In your letter
*say what has happened and how you feel
*ask them to explain why there has been such a delay
*ask the to repair the radio very soon or supply you with a new radio

2 weeks ago you bought a
radio
from a local branch of a well known chain of shops. it did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. you have waited a week and still it is not ready.
Write a letter to the shop. In your letter
*say what has happened and how you feel
*ask them to explain why there has been such a delay
*ask the to repair the
radio
very soon or supply you with a new
radio
2 weeks ago you bought a
radio
from a local branch of a well known chain of shops. it did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. you have waited a week and still it is not ready.
Write a letter to the shop. In your letter
*say what has happened and how you feel
*ask them to explain why there has been such a delay
*ask the to repair the
radio
very soon or supply you with a new
radio
2 weeks ago you bought a
radio
from a local branch of a well known chain of shops. it did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. you have waited a week and still it is not ready.
Write a letter to the shop. In your letter
*say what has happened and how you feel
*ask them to explain why there has been such a delay
*ask the to repair the
radio
very soon or supply you with a new
radio

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... branch of a well known chain of shops. it did not work properly. The shop took it...
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Line 13, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... branch of a well known chain of shops. it did not work properly. The shop took it...
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Line 23, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... branch of a well known chain of shops. it did not work properly. The shop took it...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 3.98484848485 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.63241316071 2.54303337028 64% => OK
Unique words: 62.0 127.690721649 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.234848484848 0.622605031667 38% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.41237113402 78% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.9274366331 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.75 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 4.34317383033 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.29896907216 488% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.66876848503 0.216113520407 309% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.294540725584 0.0766984524023 384% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105671613903 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22140313455 0.12726935374 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205602489033 0.0580467560999 354% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 97.53 70.7449484536 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.51 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 1.21 7.59969072165 16% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 7.0 41.2886597938 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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